Offer to Review and Critique Personal Statements:
I offer free help writing personal statements; if you'd like me to review and critique yours, just send it via e-mail. *NOTE* As of November 1, 2009, I am not accepting new personal statements for review, but watch this space for when I open things up again. In the meantime, feel free to e-mail me with any questions or concerns about your applications.From PB in Texas:
"Thank you so much, your great suggestions really got my creative juices going. My personal and diversity statements have improved greatly. So I glad I found you."From J in New York:
"Michelle provided me with lots of useful feedback and advice on my personal statement. She really helped me to clean up my essay and organize its flow. I will be sure to tell my friends about her editing and her site."From Maddy in Connecticut:
"I'm grateful for Michelle's help. She really helped me to improve my essay and pointed out a lot of things I hadn't noticed."From Jess in Boston:
"Words are not enough to express how thankful I am! Michelle’s comments were not only helpful but also motivating and encouraging. 'Non traditional' students need more Michelle’s around. She went beyond her call of duty.From Philip in Flushing, NY:
“Michelle, I really appreciate your help. Your editing is like kneading my personal statement from rough dough to a leavened pastry full of meaning, topping with the right words that I tried so hard but still unable to think up. My personal statement now has much better flow and clarity than the draft that I have been revising so many times."Adrian in California:
"Michelle is the greatest! I was fortunate enough to find her online and she has been very helpful. My personal statement would not have been as effective without her advice. I highly recommend Michelle to everyone looking to get admitted to law school. Thanks again Michelle!"From Tony in Wisconsin:
"Michelle was wonderful in critiquing my personal statement for law school applications. She provided in-depth feedback while offering support for her changes and was very helpful in her responses. Michelle was able to assist me in expanding on ideas I had started to pursue but not yet fully developed. I would highly recommend Michelle's services to all potential law school applicants."From Melissa:
I still can't believe you were willing to provide such thorough and valuable feedback regarding my personal statement with NO STRINGS attached! I am extremely grateful for your help and your encouragement! A million thank you's for your time, Michelle!!From I:
I believe Michelle's input is invaluable. Her comments are clear, constructive, and supportive. I wholeheartedly recommend her services to anyone who is seriously thinking about applying to law school.
